[CRNMC] #3 Flyer less legalese/simple

[Caitlin Alexander]

Hi,

There is "Water" in the title and then in the body it talks about air and
soil damage- this is about more than water - it is, after all, a single
issue ordinance and fracking is the issue, as we voted on at Democracy
School, not water - the positive side of the title leads with "Community
Rights".

A single-issue ordinances with "Ecosystems rights" as the single issue
would be the time to emphasize this since the right of the ecosystem in our
ordinance pertains only to fracking damage.

My two cents,

Caitlin


On Mon, Apr 28, 2014 at 9:09 AM, Meg Courtney <mcourtney1 at mcn.org> wrote:

> Here is the latest version taking Beth's suggestions.
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> I left DECIDING ABOUT WATER in the headline because it was my
> understanding that this was the POSITIVE impetus for us that makes this a
> *different* kind of ordinance than just a fracking ban, which it is as
> the single issue.
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> There is room to add the website and/or other contacts.
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> If someone wants to make a fracking ban flyer...... why not?.
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