<div dir="ltr"><div><div>I agree. We've written the ordinance in the language that we had to, but the flyer can use the terms the public will understand.<br><br></div>Thank you all for the work! It is such a pleasure to hear about all that is going on.<br>
<br></div>Blessings,<br>Kelly<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Apr 27, 2014 at 11:12 PM, Beth Brenneman <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:storyteller2069@gmail.com" target="_blank">storyteller2069@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><b>My suggestion is...instead of sharing in our "<a href="http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/intelligentsia" title="intelligentsia" target="_blank">intelligentsia</a> " group, go out and ask some Mendo Fox-news-kind-of people their opinion of these flyers. The people i asked did not understand "affirms" or "prohibits" but they did know "upholds" and "bans". Nor did they grasp the legalese for fracking. We need these people; in our quest to be eloquent, don't leave them out!</b> Beth<br>
</div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><div class="h5"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Apr 27, 2014 at 9:25 PM, Caitlin Alexander <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:caitlin29@gmail.com" target="_blank">caitlin29@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div><div>Last one, from me, tonight anyway. Going to bed!<br><br></div>Sweet dreams everyone,<br><br></div>
Caitlin<br></div><div><div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Apr 27, 2014 at 8:58 PM, Caitlin Alexander <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:caitlin29@gmail.com" target="_blank">caitlin29@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div><div><div><div>Hi Andy,<br><br></div>Cool. I think its too wordy though, perhaps short and sweet is easier for people to take in. Also, we can recommend Gasland on either Facebook or our website that is being created. <br>
<br></div>I added our Facebook info per your suggestion - here it is.<span><font color="#888888"><br></font></span></div><span><font color="#888888"><br></font></span></div><span><font color="#888888">Caitlin<br>
</font></span></div><div><div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Apr 27, 2014 at 8:49 PM, Andy Kreamer <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:andykreamer@gmail.com" target="_blank">andykreamer@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div>Thanks, Caitlin!</div><div><br></div><div>I think it's important to have some contact info for our group, at least.</div>
<div><br></div>Here is my version, based on Ali's. We thought it would be good to have a website about fracking too, not everyone already knows how bad it is.<div>
<br></div><div>I simplified words like chemical trespass to pollution. </div><span><font color="#888888"><div><br></div><div>Andy</div></font></span></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">
<div>On Sun, Apr 27, 2014 at 8:36 PM, karinajoy <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:karinacotler@gmail.com" target="_blank">karinacotler@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
</div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div><div style="word-wrap:break-word"><p style="margin:0.0px 0.0px 10.0px 0.0px;font:14.0px 'Lucida Grande'">
<span style="letter-spacing:0.0px">Caitlin, better and fewer words. That's good.</span></p>
<div><br></div><div>Not sure people will understand this: "<span style="font-family:'Lucida Grande';font-size:14px"><b>Empowers community residents legal standing to enforce these rights." </b></span> I think we should replace it with something about "the rights of people are superior to corporate power."</div>
<div><br></div><div>And maybe replacing "chemical trespass" with pollution. Just to make it simple for those who haven't studied these topics.</div><div><br></div><div>Karina</div><div><br></div><div><br></div>
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