<div dir="ltr"><div>How about now? <br><br></div>-Caitlin<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Apr 27, 2014 at 8:36 PM, karinajoy <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:karinacotler@gmail.com" target="_blank">karinacotler@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word"><p style="margin:0.0px 0.0px 10.0px 0.0px;font:14.0px 'Lucida Grande'"><span style="letter-spacing:0.0px">Caitlin, better and fewer words. That's good.</span></p>
<div><br></div><div>Not sure people will understand this: "<span style="font-family:'Lucida Grande';font-size:14px"><b>Empowers community residents legal standing to enforce these rights." </b></span> I think we should replace it with something about "the rights of people are superior to corporate power."</div>
<div><br></div><div>And maybe replacing "chemical trespass" with pollution. Just to make it simple for those who haven't studied these topics.</div><div><br></div><div>Karina</div><div><br></div><div><br></div>
<div><div>On Apr 27, 2014, at 8:19 PM, Caitlin Alexander wrote:</div><br><blockquote type="cite"><span><Community Rights.docx></span></blockquote></div><br></div><br>_______________________________________________<br>
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