<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><p style="margin: 0.0px 0.0px 10.0px 0.0px; font: 14.0px 'Lucida Grande'"><span style="letter-spacing: 0.0px">Caitlin, better and fewer words. That's good.</span></p><div><br></div><div>Not sure people will understand this: "<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 14px; "><b>Empowers community residents legal standing to enforce these rights." </b></span> I think we should replace it with something about "the rights of people are superior to corporate power."</div><div><br></div><div>And maybe replacing "chemical trespass" with pollution. Just to make it simple for those who haven't studied these topics.</div><div><br></div><div>Karina</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div>On Apr 27, 2014, at 8:19 PM, Caitlin Alexander wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><span><Community Rights.docx></span></blockquote></div><br></body></html>